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Thesis: When photographing families and those in relationships, Stanton carefully chooses rhetorical strategies in order to both appeal to his audience’s emotions and allow them to relate to his subjects.
My outline can be found here.
P.S. please note that my outline and thesis are a work in progress and if you have suggestions please feel free to comment. I plan on adding more tomorrow but just thought I could at least start today. :)
I commented on/made suggestions on these blogs:
Davis'
Kian's
Lekha's
I think you have a lot of good, diverse arguments. I think all you need to do is develop your outline a little more, and then you will have a good essay. You could also reword some of your topic sentences and thesis to make them stronger.
ReplyDeleteI definitely agree with you. :) I plan on doing that shortly, thanks for your input!
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